Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Cameron Ormsby--Week Six--Outline

Outline:

I. Introduction

a. Small Pox in the 18th Century: I want to provide some context for exactly how prevalent this disease was in different societies and the associated risks. I’ll be drawing bits and pieces from a couple of different secondary sources, like “Smallpox Inoculation in England and America: A Reappraisal” and “Dr. Thomas Dimsdale and Smallpox Inoculation in Russia”. I’ll probably throw in a few primary source quotes about smallpox from that time period for authenticity, but I’ll focus more on that when I sit down and start writing

b. Inoculation and How it Worked: I’ll cite Dr. Dimsdale’s texts on the subject, drawing primarily from Thoughts on General and Partial Inoculations, but I see this primarily as a straightforward explanation of what an inoculation is and how it differs from a vaccine.

c. Outline for Structure of Essay and Thesis

II. Small Pox Debate in Russia

a. Contextualize Catherine the Great and 18th Century Russian Society: I’ll draw on Isabel de Madariaga’s Russia in the Age of Catherine the Great to talk about what Russian society looked like during this time period. I’ll want to use this source in part to explain the lack of small pox debate; low literacy rates, little in the way of print media, a relatively uniformed lower class of serfs. Maybe look at John LeDonne’s Absolutism and Ruling Class to set the stage for my argument that public health policy under an authoritarian government is a happier and more efficient public health policy

b. Inoculation as Aspect of Modernization: For secondary sources, I’ll probably be looking at some biographies of Catherine the Great, and the ways in which her desire to modernize Russia influenced her policies. These will include Catherine the Great: A Short History, also by Isabel de Madariaga, and Catherine the Great: Life and Legend by John Alexander. In terms of primary sources, I’ll look at Catherine’s correspondence with Voltaire, which will also let me contextualize the inoculation with Enlightenment thought, and specific letters from the British Ambassador to the Russian Court. My basic plan here is to explain why Catherine would prove to be as enthusiastic an advocate for smallpox inoculation as she would become. My argument is that it represented a step towards westernization and modernization, and smallpox had had a direct impact on her own life. (Husband’s disfigurement, deaths within the court)

III. Dimsdale’s Trips

a. Narrative: I see this paragraph as a straightforward story of Thomas Dimsdale and the trips he made to Russia. I’ll be looking at primary sources including his diary, the diary of his wife, more letters from the British Ambassador, and the texts that he published after his return to Britain, like Thoughts on General and Partial Inoculations.

IV. After-Effects

a. For this I’ll be relying pretty heavily on Philip Clendenning’s essay“Dr. Thomas Dimsdale and Smallpox Inoculation in Russia” to show how Catherine the Great evolved a more comprehensive support system for inoculations. Hopefully I can find some relevant passages from the Alexander and de Madariaga biographies as well. I want to set up the argument that Catherine’s public advocacy of the inoculation popularized it amongst the nobility (I’ll have some primary source documentation for this from Dimsdale’s diary and the letters by the British Ambassador) and led to concrete changes in public health policy.

V. Small Pox Debate in American Colonies

a. Contextualizing American Society: I want to give the reader an overview for what the American Colonies were like in the 1870s, and I’m still deciding on the secondary sources I’ll be referring to. I also want to illustrate the relatively greater importance of smallpox to the American cultural consciousness, and for that I’ll be looking at Genevieve Miller’s article, “Smallpox Inoculation in England and America: A Reappraisal.” Basically I want to set up American society as a counterpoint to Russian society. The American public is much more literate, politically invested, and keenly aware of the dangers of small pox.

b. Support for Inoculation by American Elite: I’ll be looking at “Life, Liberty and the Pursuit of Vaccines” as a secondary source, and personal correspondence for various primary sources. I’m arguing that the American upper class, like the Russian nobility, supported the small pox inoculation and did what they could to encourage its practice.

c. Inoculation Opposition: I see this paragraph as dealing more directly with the debate itself and referencing primary sources like John Williams’ Several Arguments proving, that inoculating the small pox is not contained in the law of physick, either natural or divine, and therefore unlawful, the legislation in various colonies banning the practice of inoculation, and Jonathan Trumbull’s Proclamation against Inoculation. I will argue that despite the American elite’s support for inoculation, there was no coherent public policy in support of it. I’ll refer back to the first paragraph in the smallpox debate section, and argue that the founding fathers had none of Catherine the Great’s influence over the political sphere, and that local governments were dominated by a citizen that was typically more religious and less educated in the benefits of inoculation than the Jeffersons and Franklins of the country.

VI. American Revolution and Inoculations

a. For my secondary source, I’ll be referring to Ann Becker’s“Small Pox in Washington’s Army,” which explains why the mandatory inoculation for the Continental Army became necessary. I think I’ll be following up on her footnotes for a lot of the primary source material here, basically just quotes by generals on the devastation of small pox, etc.

VII. After-Effects

a. In which I look at the legislation that repeals the small pox bans like Rhode Islands’ Act Permitting the Inoculation of Small Pox to be Permitted Within This Colony, and the American governments support of the small pox inoculation and later the vaccine. Maybe some primary source material post-American Revolution in support of the inoculation.

VIII. Conclusion

8 comments:

  1. Hey Cameron, this looks like a well laid out paper. It seems like a wise move to focus on the importance of Catherine the Great in Russia, especially concerning the smallpox debate. I'd definitely advise including that in you introduction. Also, was Catherine's influence in the smallpox debate greater than her influence in other domains?

    You say you're going to devote a paragraph to Dimsdale's trips, but I'd guess you'll probably want to write more about him than that. Maybe it's more just background information for your paper, but he strikes me as a pretty important and interesting character.

    I like juxtaposing America of the time with Russia, and think it's great that you're not only analyzing the smallpox situation, but also the overall social situation in both countries. This will tie in nicely with Russia trying to "westernize," and America is interesting because it is in a way nouveau-West.

    I think I'd recommend keeping the section about inoculation opposition in a separate sphere than those dealing with the American situation specifically.

    Overall, it looks like a cogent and interesting paper!

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  2. Just recalled that John Alexander wrote a book on Catherine the Great's response (well,her government's) response to a bubonic plague epidemic. can't recall the title. Perhaps he talks more generally about public health, smallpox, etc.?

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  3. It seems like it would be good to use Dimsdale in context of the small pox debate in Russia. I think Catherine the Great is a good source and the way you laid out the debate looks great. But including a differing perspective might add to the debate. Right now it seems like Dimsdales account is too separate from the America vs. Russia debate.

    Mackenzie Tudor

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  4. I like your main argument. I think it's interesting that Americans, despite being more aware than their counterparts in Britain and Russia of the dangers of smallpox, mustered a much more vigorous resistance to widespread inoculation than elsewhere. Maybe this is a point you could address in your paper.

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  5. Hi Cameron,

    Nicely done outline.

    Not to harp on the health policy/relationship of the state to the body thing, but maybe you could go into that in your conclusion? Or maybe, more generally, address what this meant for the US and/or Russia in their future approaches to the health of the population.

    Maybe clarify the relationship between inoculation and modernity. Why was this such an important part of modernizing to Catherine?

    That's all I can think of.

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  6. Hi Cameron,

    As ever, really well organized and prepared! The one idea you may want to add is (as we talked about last week) the effects having a monarchy (and one who was head of the Church) would have had compared to republicans whose legitimacy was purely a question of votes, not involving divine rights. If you wanted to go down this line, you could add a small section after discussing the American experience with inoculations for smallpox.

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  7. Hi Cameron,
    Just a brief thought, but since youre citing Dimsdale's account on what innoculation is just before your thesis, but then you go into the smallpox debate in Russia before moving back to Dimsdale, it might make more sense to move Dimsdale up, especially because it seems that the debate in Russia was really incited by him. But overall nice outline, I like the flow and look forward to seeing your paper!

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  8. Sounds great. And I finally understand the relationship between America-Russia you have been talking about. America is a counterpoint, or a sort of anectodal example, right? That seems to be a good way to do it.

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